A blacksmith's apprentice turns revolutionary, leaving behind his lover in a tale of romance, rebellion, and the devastating cost of trying to forge a better world.
I actually feel the opposite - that rather than a disservice, the political aspects made it feel more grounded and gave the separation and ending a more... 'solid' feeling, if that makes sense... 😅
Thank you, E. H.! I appreciate your feedback. That helps a lot, since I know I do tend to veer into the abstract and fail to ground my story sometimes.
I was touched by this tragic story.
I actually feel the opposite - that rather than a disservice, the political aspects made it feel more grounded and gave the separation and ending a more... 'solid' feeling, if that makes sense... 😅
Thank you, E. H.! I appreciate your feedback. That helps a lot, since I know I do tend to veer into the abstract and fail to ground my story sometimes.